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Sunday, February 28, 2010

15 Minutes of Flame

Simmering

In the pit

Of her stomach

Rage erupts.

Volcano like

Rage;

through her

Stomach

To the top

Of her head

Fire

Emerges.

Her body

Shakes

and

Trembles

as

Anger

Is leashed.

The flame

Simmers

 put

To rest

With

alcohol

2 comments:

  1. you have pretty good imagery skills . I think you ended the poem too early frankly. Don't be afraid to dig deeper.

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  2. and so begins the life of the mentally disabled.

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