Thursday, September 9, 2010
Slain
My mind hurts from the pain and strain of thinking bout you. I imagine us( as we) together forever and it hurts. I'm not talking about a good love pain. But a heart slain. I can no longer embrace this place "we" have come to. It is you I will no longer run to. But through it all I have grown stronger and wiser. I will see if you haven't destroyed the better half of me. I will search for my destiny and proceed with excellence; so step away save face, you are no longer welcome in this place. My head hurts from the pain,the strain of my heart which you have slain.
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Excellent verbage my dear. I feel your pain and I wish I could take it from you.
ReplyDeleteThis is an excellent display of emotions in poetry form. Express with raw pain, no tricks, no word play just pure gut feelings. Dear Victoria you express yoursel well. Continue to write please. xo xo
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