I want to lay in the thickness of sex
Drenched, in the wetness of sweat
Inhaling the scent that seeps from our pours
As it lingers, I want you more
Bodies on fire take each other higher
I want to lay in the thickness of sex
Head to toe drenched in your sweat
I'm not done with you yet.
No Offense but your poems suck.. Try writing something more clever with less repeating words.
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