Come along with me on my journey.. as I travel the hearts and minds of many. I am going to be posting more about my life changes, thoughts, actions and stirring of my spirit. Poetry will come eventually. Until then it's just going to be MVP and the journey to the liberation of Afrikan people and self.
Hope you will find things interesting enough to stick around and read. :)
PEACE
Taste that, aint it sweet?
Put a little sugar on my
strawberry
Let it marinate
Enhance the flavor
Don't eat it all now
Save some for later.
Don't forget to add
the whipped cream
Thick and creamy
u know what I mean
Punctuation is very important. "Taste that, ain't it sweet" means something completely different from "taste that ain't it sweet" The poet must show the reader how the poem flows. The content is cute and clever. You have great ideas and, you write more effectively when you use the proper tools of language
I agree w/Ron. Punctuation is very important. The poem itself was very good. You can take it to mean more than one thing depending on where your mind is at. :)
Punctuation is very important. "Taste that, ain't it sweet" means something completely different from "taste that ain't it sweet" The poet must show the reader how the poem flows. The content is cute and clever. You have great ideas and, you write more effectively when you use the proper tools of language
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ReplyDeleteI agree w/Ron. Punctuation is very important. The poem itself was very good. You can take it to mean more than one thing depending on where your mind is at. :)
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