Words on the screen
What do they mean?
Her only escape
her chance to be free
she Can't wait to see..
those words on the screen.
Gitty inside,like a young girl
smiling big enjoying her world
not a lot, just a little some
those words are a lot of fun.
When did it change
from just being words
to meaning something
Going over them
again
and
again
she keeps smiling
almost to no end
Very good. Nice flow, good word choices and the imagery is strong. I can see the writer rushing to the computer to see what is new. You also did a great job of demonstrating how we use the internet as an escape. Brava!
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