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Sunday, July 4, 2010

I'm Done

I'm done
thinking
I'm done
dreaming
I am... finished
wishing
hoping
wanting
longing

for you

2 comments:

  1. This sounds like your fed up and the final overtones are clear. Wanted to read more but being brief in this piece proves your tired...

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  2. Too inconclusive; it leaves the audience dangling. There is no sense of completion or resolution.

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