No matter what I do, I can't stop thinking of you
Do you think of me, where ever you be?
Do I cross your mind at any particular time?
Do you push me away or let me stay?
I know this is a one sided love affair
Sometimes I don't even care
Been alone for a long time
But in my mind we come alive
I'm not going to lie
Its hurts real bad
sometimes
This one sided love affair
Like you even care
You don't even know
I care for you so
needs work; has great potential
ReplyDeleteI think line 2 could have been worded differently. Also, watch your typos. Line 10. Otherwise, as Ron stated, it has potential.
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