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Monday, July 5, 2010

Skin so Soft

My Brown skin is so

Soft

Warm

Smooth

Almost perfect

All that's missing

Is you caressing

And kissing it

2 comments:

  1. Nice work, short and to the point. Thats how you get what you desire by showing and telling.
    So proud of you.....

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  2. Very good poem. Not a wasted syllable to be found. Probably your 2nd best poem written so far.

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