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Friday, July 16, 2010

Run

A long stretch of road
Never ending pavement
Deserted, no one in site
I want to run
Don't look back
I want to run
I have no place to go
I'm stuck

2 comments:

  1. Your poems lately speak of sadness in your heart and in your soul. It speaks of decisions that have to be made no matter how difficult they are. Do what you need to do for yourself and the rest will fall into place. I will always be in your corner.

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  2. Well written but, it seems incomplete. And in poetry spelling IS important. Did you mean site(place or location) or did you mean sight (vision, field of vision)? Its very important to use your words precisely and with plan in poetry.

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