Come along with me on my journey.. as I travel the hearts and minds of many. I am going to be posting more about my life changes, thoughts, actions and stirring of my spirit. Poetry will come eventually. Until then it's just going to be MVP and the journey to the liberation of Afrikan people and self.
Hope you will find things interesting enough to stick around and read. :)
PEACE
Make love to me
Not just physically
Mind, and soul as well
Feels so good, can't you tell
When you stimulate me
From head to toe
Inside and out I like it so
Ohh baby you feel so good
When your all in my mind
Make love to me, one more time
the first three lines are cliched and overused. The last three are very strong and impress the feelings well. You might consider reworking this one.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading it. Good job.
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